Readability?
Leave time for people to read it.
Readability?
Leave time for people to read it.
Nice.
It wasn't terrible. The bad bit was the song, which had some nice lyrics, but the voice was, although practiced, not that great. but I liked the video. Also, the link is broken.
newgrounds always does that to links, puts a space in them
Nice
I didn't quite understand it, and the bottom line of text was cut off. Otherwise, nice job.
Hi. I am ArthuruhtrA. I haven't been creative in a while, but I'm around somewhere. I'd be down to do some voice acting, I'm a natural Bass.
Male
Paramedic/Sometimes
For some reason, I still am...
The Middle of Somewhere
Joined on 5/8/10